NOTHING IN THIS PLACE IS WHAT IT SEEMS
NEON COLORS IN NIGHT SKY
CONFUSION LOOMS BUT I DON'T KNOW WHY
RAINBOWS ~ ELVES AND FAIRIES THRIVE
IS THIS A DREAM ~ AM I STILL ALIVE?
SCATTERED THOUGHTS ~ INVADE MY DREAMS
SADNESS AND ANGER SEARCH FOR RELEASE
EERIE PEACE COMES OVER ME
WHAT DOES THIS MEAN ~ AM I REALLY FREE
RISING SUN ~ BIRDS ~ MORNING SONG
NEW FOUND PERFECT PEACE, BUT FOR HOW LONG?
ARE THESE JUST DREAMS? NOTHING'S WHAT IT SEEMS !
EERIE PEACE COMES OVER ME
WHAT DOES IT MEAN ~ AM I REALLY FREE?
RISING SUN ~ BIRDS ~ MORNING SONG
AND A NEW FOUND PEACE ~ BUT FOR HOW LONG?
ARE THESE DREAMS ~ NOTHING IS WHAT IT SEEMS!
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This a really nice poem!
Thank you very much. I didn't think it made sense LOL
cleverly done good rhyme and meter! ww
Thanks for sharing TERESA ~ Lovely thoughts and well written ~ Love that you used capitals it emphasizes the conundrum in the title "Nothing is what it seems" Love and HUGS ~ BRIAN
took your advice Brian.
Actually it does make sense. The mind wanders. One minute we are thinking about elves and faries, then about anger, and sadness. Then there are periods of lucidity enjoying the sunshine. Well done.
Thank you Augustus, poetry is a new world to me. I am never sure if what I am writing qualifies.
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