just a little bit afraid of what your saying to me
always starts little
then grows
like vines
but its my mind
fear takes over
what i don't realize
what i don't acknowledge
if my love stops looking at me with stars in his eyes,
the birds will still fly
if my mother abandons me,
the sea will still wave hello to me
if my inspiration ceases before me,
the world will never cease to amaze me
if all the love in the world was beat down,
i would still love
and if the pain of everyone and everything angered me to the end of time,
i would still find peace in my music & rain that poured on a springs morning chime.
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Author:
Aals (
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- Comment from author about the poem: ive been so happy lately, trying to not let my grades drop, so many options have been given to me lately, and i feel proud working to make the right choice.
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THANKS FOR THE CHALLENGE AALS ! METANOIA ~ A complete change of heart ! Love the serene optimism in this poem and your comment on your current state of mind ! A nice State to be in ! Your current state of EUPHORIA (better than TEXAS !) enables you to override the basically important things in life ~ the starry look of your Lover ~ the care of your MOM ~ cessation of Inspiration ~ destruction of the World's Love and the ANGST of the whole World etc etc I WILL STILL FIND PEACE IN MY MUSIC & RAIN THAT POURED ON A SPRINGS MORNING CHIME ! AWESOME ! I feel pretty CHIPPER today AALS but nowhere near as CHIPPER as YOU ! Thanks for sharing ~ much food for thought ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
AWEEEE thats so sweet <3 haha thankyou sm
wow this is a rather unique positive poem, creatively done and quitters should learn from it. u write in an attractive way here. kudos.
u r warmly welcome to comment on my latest poem too/.
Awesome write
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