Like a thirsty Child looking for a drink
I search for you O Lord and have found you !
I have sensed your very presence in Church
In the Worship Service ~ in the Hour of Prayer
I have felt You near me ~ I realise
Lord your love ~ is better than life itself !
My heart is full of Joy and Contentment
My mouth is now filled with Praise for You
Even the night hours no longer cause fear
As I contemplate your concern for me !
Enemies of my soul seek to betray me
BUT ~ I am very secure in your hand.
Now that I have so long sought ~ and found You
I shall be Safe and Happy for ever !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love to all ~ BRIAN
This poem is presented as a 6 6 2 sonnet in iambic hexameter ~ OK
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 11th, 2016 03:45
- Comment from author about the poem: Because most of us in the UK & USA are not at work on a SUNDAY ~ It gives us an opportunity to attend CHURCH to worship. This is especially rewarding during the ADVENT SEASON because we can enjoy singing all the well known CHRISTMAS CAROLS. I the UK Doctors are saying that singing carols and hymns exercises your lungs and gives you a healthier and longer life. I'm just getting ready for the Children's Christmas Service ~ AMEN ~ Love BRIAN XOX
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Excellent poem Brian! I loved it! I also was intrigued about the part in your authors notes about singing giving you a longer life. Great job all around! Hugs in spirit--Christina
Hi CHRIS ~ iT'S ALL PART OF THE PULMONARY SYSTEM ! Oxygen as you know is vital to LIFE, If you sing it increases your lung capacity ~ blood flow etc. This improves your life#style and you live longer ! Thanks also for you comment on the poem ! HUGS in the Spirit ~ DOCTOR BRIAN
Excellent and well written
Thanks TONY both the FORM and FUNCTION of a poem are important ! BRIAN
Beautiful! I have felt this during worship. Super Talented!
Thanks REBECCA ~ pleased you can relate to it ! There are many Spiritual Members on MPS and if you post something Spiritual you will always get a positive response ! Yours BRIAN
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