We've both been on this world too long
To think like love is such a thing to be lost.
Eradication to us only means to foment and flout
All the things we thought were tangent, there's too much
In me too much mitigation and pretext I can't be someone
When being adjunct to another is all I know it's a dilemma
Mandatory of those who cannot find that coveted carnage, that Bloody bloodlust for bodies within them it's an insurrection
I'm sorry I can't be yours I'm no singularity in a world of diversity
Please stay stalwart against adversity I can't bear the somnolent
Effect my belie had upon your bitter nature pardon this intrusion
But I loved you, so please, remember to floss its wrong to be remiss
This antiquated aberration could only have lasted so long
We were intractable celestial beings in a galaxy of certitude there
Was no way we could disburse what makes us private beings
It took a titanic effort just to be juxtaposed in a maelstrom of
A juncture made out of our optimistic fear of pillory proliferation
Quickly into the opposite of optimum I just can't be what it was
You wanted.

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Author:
Edith Faye (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 13th, 2016 00:53
- Comment from author about the poem: Supposed to be about social negativity around self-worth and the fear of being inadequate. \r\n\r\nCan also be about sexual relationships, for example, being someone\\\'s first or having a first anything and being afraid of not being enough. \r\n\r\nAlso can be tied to family relationships, in having a fear of failing those you respect.
- Category: Love
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WELCOME LG ~ Thanks for sharing an enigmatic frist poem ! Your "comment" (with the r-n-r-n interjections) does give us some clues to its meaning. Social negativity ~ sexual relationships ~ inadequacy ~ responsibility in Family relationships. "Life on Planet Earth" is a unique privilege but (as you infer) it can be irksome. YES we are individuals but "no man is an island" therefore we are always adjunct to others ! Singularity ~ diversity ~ adversity are feelings we all have to share and come to terms with. I can emphasise with you final paragraph ! "It tooka titanic effort just to be juxtaposed in a maelstrom of a juncture made out of our optimistic fear of pillory proliferation quickly into the opposite of optimism. I just can't be what it was you wanted !" Thank you for caring ~ Yours BRIAN (UK).
Awesome write
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