I wake every morning to look in circular reflective object and
leave.
But today didn’t feel right.
Sudden fraught with one mind
I was Puzzled every morning to look in it and leave..
I look in it closely and there was these things
contemplating me.
I felt misjudgement rise upon me but then i realized…
it was the same me but 10 years later.
MY knees dropped to floor with anguish.
all of the sudden... i experienced reminiscence
vibes of heaviness of heart
I know that
…I missed the boat to forgiveness
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Author:
pandora123 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 14th, 2016 15:17
- Category: Forgiveness
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Comments1
Thanks for your First Poem PANDORA ~ and welcome to MPS. A well penned poem but with an enigmatic subject ! As I get older (I'm 33) I sometimes see my Dad looking back at me ~ then i realise it's still me at his age ! If I was 43 (in the mirror !) I guess I would get a shock ! FORGIVENESS is a big subject and lack of it does age us ! However in my experience DIVINE FORGIVENESS is available 24/7 and we can never miss God's Boat. However forgiveness from our fellow Humans is more fickle and ephemeral. Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN.
Thank you for comment on my poem I see where you come from with my ending of my poem.As someone who does believe in god that ending was for me was not ready forgiveness in my self but I know God does forgive me though.Thanks.
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