I Know Not

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  BRIAN & ANGELA December 16th, 2016 11:27

  WELCOME RAAVEN ~ Thanks for a very interesting and enigmatic first poem ! So so many request in your poem ~ some of which are contradictory. We all want our minds and senses stimulated by those who cross our paths ~ Touched ~ Teased ~ Refreshed ~ Taught ~ etc BUT perhaps not to be deceived ~ scorned ~ hated ? I find as I go through life that i am also faced with all these (sometimes conflicting) responses ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN (UK)

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    XxRaavenSairasxXDecember 16th, 2016 11:29

    Thanks so much! That was actually my inspiration for this poem, the uncertainty of my life at this point in time. This piece is about confusion and contradiction for me, all the way.

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  Augustus December 16th, 2016 16:02

  I like the way this reads in an effortless way. The contradictions. Love me. Hate me. Reminds me of how often I've been puzzled by the opposite sex. Welcome.

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  MaxWritesPoems December 16th, 2016 21:42

  I love this so much, it truly is beautiful.

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  XxRaavenSairasxX December 16th, 2016 22:20

  Thanks everybody!

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  myinnervoice December 17th, 2016 01:37

  It speaks to the duality of humanity, or at least my own. The constant contradiction of your wants and desires, and the frustration in not being able to truly express yourself or said desires. Or maybe im reading my own meaning into this, either way i enjoyed it and it made me feel a little less alone in life. So thank you.

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    XxRaavenSairasxXDecember 17th, 2016 01:41

    Even if you were reading your own meaning into it, I'd be glad that you were. I love doing that personally with song lyrics and such, I love to identify with things, so I'm glad to have written something someone else can relate to. After reading your poem Courting Agony, I feel that we have a similar style too, so thanks!

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    myinnervoiceDecember 17th, 2016 01:49

    Thanks for taking time to read my poem, its my first since i was a kid so i appreciate that. I look forward to reading your other poems after this.