I can write a love letter that would make you cry.
my words, my written lines, are all I have
they are my heart, my thoughts, my all.
my words are true, my words cant lie
all my dreams, all my hopes.
all my nightmares, all my fears.
written down for you
written for me
I will write to you and you shall shed your tears.
for all I am, I am for you
my written words, my dreams ,my fears.
written down, coming up through my soul
will you read, will you understand to?? #iamiwasiwillbe😊
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illia (Pseudonym) (
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interesting write I enjoyed reading. ww
Thankyou, WW. Glad u enjoyed it, I am to please 😊
Cool.nice work.
Thanks NACTON ~ very beautiful sentiments of love ~ BUT ~ Is it consumated LOVE or unrequited LOVE ? Thinking of you ~ Hugs BRIAN
It's just love ❤. Simple as that. Thanks Brian glad you enjoyed it 😊
Loving message. I question if the recepient will cry. It presupposes the emotions of someone else. They could take that the wrong way. (Forgive me for nitpicking) After all You pouring your heart out in a beautiful poetic way. Nicely done.
Its irrelevant about if I make a certain person cry. I wasn't saying that, i was just being so big headed. that if I was to write a pure love letter. It would make the recipient cry. Lol emotions are funny buggers aint they 😊
You know what that was my initial reaction. That this guy is super confident. Please escuse my drifting somewhere else.
I know exactly how I feel when I write my poetry. Thus that's why I love to write. All those emotions and sparks flying through the mind. Nit picking, not at all. I will take it as a compliment. Thanks xx 😉 so glad its appreciated #icanbeanyoneanything/idreamx😉
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