2 eyes 1 lonely lie


I watch my surroundings being watched
I have 2 eyes and 1 lonely lie
I place myself in perfect position
Posing for my lie
I get ready, take a leap forward
I say "I Love You"
It Takes 2 eyes to realize What I've said
She turns and says it back
I watch the words come out her mouth like lyrics in a music video, except I numb the noise.
I watch with my 2 eyes and see how it's being said
Her position is messed up, she didn't step forward, she doesn't get ready
Does she love me?



  • willyweed

    we believe what we want to we have to find our own truth.
    but I hear what you're saying. good write! write on ww

  • Tony36

    I agree with WW, GREAT WRITE

  • Christina8

    I say follow your gut instinct. Great poem!--Christina


    WELCOME ISMAR ~ Thanks for your first poem. The Eyes are the "Windows of the Soul" ! When my current GF says she "Loves Me" I look deep in her eyes and KNOW she is telling me the TRUTH ~ TRY IT ! Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)

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