Spiraling

Augustus

 

DNA spiraling out of control

Creates challenges manyfold.

 

Tiny fragments broken within

Alter brain, bone, liver and skin.

 

Many organs are not immune.

A double helix sequence hewn.

 

Environment spiraling out of control

DNA challenges the future untold.

 

Augustus / Folsom LA / January 2016

  • Author: Augustus (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 4th, 2017 08:55
  • Comment from author about the poem: Small changes in our cells from contaminated food, water and air are being blamed in part for increases in cancer.
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 31
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  • Michael Edwards

    Cancer is such a big worry and there are so many forms - yes our diet and life styles are questionable as your great poem indicates.

    • Augustus

      I can't remember the name of the book I read last year but hormones in meat and residual pesticides were some of what I remember. Thanks.

    • willyweed

      cancer nuclear war in the body, your facts are sad but true. the clock is ticking.

      • Augustus

        I'm in the hospital as we speak. The sand is running out of the clock. Thanks.

        • willyweed

          I am so sorry to hear that, I wish you the best Augustus,
          get well soon!

          King of Kings

          Oh’ King of Kings
          I beg can you forgive me

          With your grace put my mind at ease

          I have walked down in the valley
          The shadow hath been cast upon me

          You held me up when I stumbled
          To the madness you brought sanity

          I faced the beast and I slew him
          You gave me strength you walked with me

          Oh’ King of Kings
          I beg for your forgiveness

          At times I thought that you had abandoned me
          I was afraid down in the valley but now I can see

          Oh’ King of Kings bless my spirit
          And let me walk with thee



          • Augustus

            Oh wow. Thanks so much.

            • willyweed

              You are so much more than welcome, I wrote this after a combat tour in Vietnam
              I served with the 5th marines infantry regiment, I was afraid. ww

              • Augustus

                I copied it on to my document file where I will visit it often. I was lucky. I spent Vietnam in Valdosta GA. Moody Air Force base. Thanks for your service.

                • willyweed

                  Thank You Augustus and thank you for your service,

                • Tony36

                  Great write

                  • Augustus

                    Thanks Tony

                    • Tony36

                      Welcome

                    • WriteBeLight

                      Love the science and reality in your poem and HATE cancer!!

                      • Augustus

                        And you are an angel. Thanks

                        • WriteBeLight

                          Welcome Augustus!

                        • Christina8

                          I do like your poem but its so sad to get the news. So many people struggle with it. Great job!--Christina

                          • Augustus

                            Lots of women in their thirties with breast cancer. Thanks.

                          • P.H.Rose

                            Great poem Augustus,
                            Horrible subject..
                            But great poem

                            • Augustus

                              Thanks for reading and commenting.

                            • rrodriguez

                              Mr. Augustus, I pray that you get well very soon. It saddens me to hear that you are in the hospital.

                              • Augustus

                                Thank you new friend. I am home now.

                                • rrodriguez

                                  I pray you stay well and we can correspond more thorough our newly found poetry.

                                  • Augustus

                                    Than you and all prayers welcomed. Prior to my illness I did blacksmithing and woodworking. I'm too weak for that. Writing helps keep me from being totally depressed.

                                    • rrodriguez

                                      No time for depression; but to write and write...



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