Some thoughts run deep like a well
But for shallow minds
They drown in the depths
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Author:
notapoet (
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- Category: Reflection
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Some thoughts run deep like a well
But for shallow minds
They drown in the depths
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Quaint bit of wisdom! nice nap!
Thank you kindly.
Short and sweet but packed full of wisdom!! Loved it! Christina
Thanks again chrissy....
Short, sweet, and true wonderful write
Glad you liked it Tony, thank you.
Welcome
In a Station of the Metro
By Ezra Pound
The apparition of these faces in the crowd; Petals on a wet, black bough.
Your poem has distinction; this is the quality of your poem. Remarkable!
Thank you so much for the kind words and to be compared to such a great is an honor "of which I'm sure I fall terribly shot of" but an honor non the less.Thanks again rrodriguez for your comment.
Writing a short poem is not easy. It's to create images so vividly that your reader respond to them deeply. It's to wrestle for the right image without being bland and without being cliché.
Excellent!
Much appreciated!
I Like It!!
Thank you sir, glad you liked it.
I' , mm , try, try,ing to. Res, gulp, respond,, glug, but I'm -- gulp.
All kidding aside , nicely done.
lol, good one.... thanks Augustus for the continued support.
Me - I like it too
Thank you for the read and taking time to comment, means a lot.
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