Chocolate is my favorite treat.
It is my favorite snack
If there's anything in my diet
it's chocolate that I lack.
It's not that I go overboard
or that I cannot quit!
I'm of an almost healthy weight
I just simply lose my wits!
Chocolate is so creamy. Delectable.
You must keep it from my sight.
I can't stop at one or two squares
It takes everything--all my might.
One square of dark chocolate a day
is healthy, but I favor two,
I just wanna be sure I'm reaping
all the benefits--it's true!
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: One square (not a candybar!) of dark chocolate a day is full of antioxidants and decreases risk of heart disease. Just having fun with a light airy poem!!
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That is a chocolate success! Very, very good and I can relate!
It's a silly poem, because all my poems are so deep and personal. Thanks for your kind words!
Not silly at all! Great subject matter. Thanks for the extra tip on the health benefits!
Whimsical - I like it!
Thanks, it was meant to be because all my poetry is so deep and personal. Thank you!
Haha chocolate is like my favorite thing ever! Love this poem!
I really appreciate that comment. I have so many dark poems I had to get an light and airy one out! THanks again!
Lol love it wonderful write
Hey thanks Tony!!
Welcome
Ahhhhhhh CHRIS ~ CHOCOLATE now you are rhyming on a very important subject. I love the flavour and effects of Chocolate ! Cakes ~ Puddings ~ Easter Eggs and Chocolate Bars ~ White ~ Milk but especially Dark. It does contain antioxidants and helps the heart. However ladies in their prime (35 ~ 55) should be aware it contains two APHRODISIACS ~ Phenylethylamine and Tryptophan and a STIMULANT ~ Theobromine. I never let my Partners eat chocolate in BED ! One of my Catering Students did her thesis on Chocolate and we had to provide her with a Chaperone ! Pleased you enjoy choc ~ awesome poem ~ but only one bar per day ~ OK. Hershey's Candy kisses from BRIAN
Not the whole bar!! lol Thanks for commenting. I appreciate it! I was aware of all but the stimulants. Goodness! Very informative you are as usual. Thanks so much for your awesome review. Chocolate hugs from me! Christina
From one Chocaholic to another, that was a real sweet poem. Bravo!!
Oh thank you Daniel! I appreciate that. Had to do something light!
I wrote a poem about chocolate over a year ago. Hhhmmm! I'll search my laptop and post it here LOL.
Nice poem Christina
Thanks so much Vic! I had to get off my serious tone for a bit. I appreciate your feedback!!
Antioxidant success. P.S. My wife's birthday today and got her a white chocholate strawberry cake.
Thanks Augustus! You are a sweetheart! I'm sure your wife is going to love it!!!
Augustus, wow... great! I'm really happy to see that you're back in the neighborhood. What's going on buddy?
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Great write, I love chocolate! maybe too much 🙂
You can't love it too much! lol But I certainly do appreciate the review!
I am with you on this one
very yummy poem. ww
Thanks ww! I appreciate it!
I am not a great fan of chocolate and rarely touch it .. I think I was spoilt as a child.. my grandparents had a general store and sweet shop ... I did enjoy your sweet little rhyme here tho.... Neville
Well thank you dear Neville for your reply! I adore chocolate as you can see!
I can indeed...
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