You leaving does not change anything
It can't erase the memories
It can't take you out of my mind
It can't diminish my love for you
You leaving does not change anything other than you being gone
I am stuck with the memories and my feelings haunting me every night
Worse than a ghost
Because fear would feel far better than this pain
The love I have for you is now a waste
It's like having having a brand new package of pens with no paper to write on
Useless and sad
When I met you I finally felt as though I could breathe
You made me feel things I've never felt before
You allowed me to see colors that hadn't been created
So when you left
It wasn't just me living the life I had before I met you
Not only can I not breathe
But I am drowning in an ocean
And all I can see is darkness because all the colors you allowed me to see vanished when you left me
And the worst part is
Even though I'm drowning
I can't feel it
I feel nothing
Because all of the things you allowed me to feel left me when you did
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Author:
colorlessdreams01 (
Offline) - Published: January 10th, 2017 01:42
- Category: Love
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Great write
WELCOME CD ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ full of energy and rhythm but with such a sad sad subject. I am old enough (33) to be able to empathise with you ~ BUT ~ I am in a new relationship now and most of the feelings are slowly returning. The senses you describe ~ haunted mind ~ wasted love ~ colourless ~ breathless and NOTHING are he sensations I have experienced ~ more than once ! Thinking of you ~ thanks for sharing ~ Please check my Poems BRIAN.
Welcome to MPS! It sounds like you're numb from the breakup. Unfortunately most of us go through it. You will find this site to be very supportive. Hopefully you'll keep writing. Thanks for sharing!
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