Annihilated

colorlessdreams01

You leaving does not change anything

It can't erase the memories

It can't take you out of my mind

It can't diminish my love for you

You leaving does not change anything other than you being gone

I am stuck with the memories and my feelings haunting me every night

Worse than a ghost

Because fear would feel far better than this pain

The love I have for you is now a waste

It's like having having a brand new package of pens with no paper to write on

Useless and sad

When I met you I finally felt as though I could breathe

You made me feel things I've never felt before

You allowed me to see colors that hadn't been created

So when you left

It wasn't just me living the life I had before I met you

Not only can I not breathe
But I am drowning in an ocean

And all I can see is darkness because all the colors you allowed me to see vanished when you left me

And the worst part is
Even though I'm drowning

I can't feel it

I feel nothing

Because all of the things you allowed me to feel left me when you did

  • Author: colorlessdreams01 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 10th, 2017 01:42
  • Category: Love
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  • Tony36

    Great write

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME CD ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ full of energy and rhythm but with such a sad sad subject. I am old enough (33) to be able to empathise with you ~ BUT ~ I am in a new relationship now and most of the feelings are slowly returning. The senses you describe ~ haunted mind ~ wasted love ~ colourless ~ breathless and NOTHING are he sensations I have experienced ~ more than once ! Thinking of you ~ thanks for sharing ~ Please check my Poems BRIAN.

  • Christina8

    Welcome to MPS! It sounds like you're numb from the breakup. Unfortunately most of us go through it. You will find this site to be very supportive. Hopefully you'll keep writing. Thanks for sharing!



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