EVEN YOU FORGOT THE PROMISES YOU'VE MADE
DAYS WITH YOU SEEMS NOT TO LOSE
WITH THE SPECIAL MEMORIES OF THE LOVE YOU GAVE
AND EVEN YOUR UNIQUE POINTS OF VIEWS
RECALL THE WORDS YOU SAID TO ME
DECORATED EVERYTHING I SEE
FOR ALL OF MY LIFE I FEEL SO LUCKY
EVERY TIME YOU SEND SOME TEXT FOR ME
RARE FEELINGS THAT I CAN'T EXPLAIN
MAKES ME SMILE,IT CAN EASE THE PAIN
I'M THANKFUL FOR THE PAST YOU'VE ONCE WITH ME
NOW YOU'RE FAR AWAY WISH YOU'LL BE HAPPY
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Author:
Gelyn Guinto Rodriguez (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 13th, 2017 04:14
- Category: Love
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Comments3
Thanks GELYN for an excellent poem in Structure and Sentiment ! Acrostics are difficult ~ Rhyming Acrostics impossible ! Well done ! EDWARD FERMIN seems a real nice Guy ~ pit you let him slip so so far away. Thinking of you ~ HUGS BRIAN
Great write
Hahaha. ..Brian You got it right. .. He's my puppy love. ... but I already moved on. .I'm just sharing this coz this...my first attempt of ACROSTIC. .Thanks also to Mr. Tony and Miss Kathy for the comment
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