should she, shouldn't she,
would he be there?
feet are bruised
tired and blistered
deep inside the tension is raging,
in every single sense
been here over and again
invisible blending, her only defense
been there time and again
why walk
when you can take a train
should she, shouldn't she,
would she, will he.
did she, didn't he.
will she, wont he
be there, waiting,waiting for time
no walking, no blistered feet
why walk when he can take a train.
deep inside, anticipation's are reeling
facing that deepest fear
will she, will he, could they, should they
will they, wont they
who's to say, anyone can ride a train today.
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Author:
illia (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 13th, 2017 07:59
- Comment from author about the poem: 2001, one of my oldies. Sort of ish. Only written 16yrs ago.
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Thanks for sharing ILLIA. Often a train Journey (one way) is 50 miles or more ~ great distance to walk. The problem in the UK ~ if you want to get somewhere quick ~ trains are so so expensive. Buses are slow but often only one-third the price and much much quicker than walking. ! In my experience the question "Should i take the Train ?" is a perennial one ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN ~ PLEASE check my poems ~ Thanks B
I would say to take the train would be more of a metaphor for timeless love and wether it is worth all the walking in the world. But as my last line mention's anyone can take a train today. Thus love is everywhere for everyone even those who have to walk through more than a train ride to find love.
Got nout to do with price of train fare lol. 😉
Beautiful! With my luck, we'd both take a train and they'd pass each other and never meet. -- phoenix
I think its safe to say we would definitely not meet in phoenix. Lol. 😃 I live in England so would take some train journey. But these time travelling engine's have gotten a lit quicker than times of old. Times of dark. I just wonder how quickly this revolution will be over.
Awesome write
I love it 😍
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