I Day.

Fay Slimm.

 

I Day
always try waking Night by slowly kissing
his languid lips
with my first rays and twining pale light

round his lazy reclining.

I creep sinuously into Night's prostrated
stillness, glide through
his dreams and, seducing with soft
finger-movements,

I await his arousal.

Night without me would be inclined to
snooze time away

but I Day
douse his passion for inactivity.

An hour or two of early fore-play urges
on my inclination
before sunrise when work will call.

I feel my breast
heaving as dawns's dynamics surge
round my veins

so writhing with readiness I try again
but on failing

I Day

then push Night straight out of bed.

 

 

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 13th, 2017 12:22
  • Comment from author about the poem: Living in the beautiful county of Cornwall U.K. and next door to the sea I am ever finding beauty in coastal sunsets and seascapes. I hope you enjoy the fun-side of what I saw recently in dawn arising. A big welcome to my page and to this my first poem posted here. Thank you for the visit and any comment you may like to make.
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 121
  • User favorite of this poem: Jamie.
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Comments11

  • Phoenix8523

    Wonderfully written! -- phoenix

    • Fay Slimm.

      So pleased you enjoyed the write - good to have you Phoenix as the first reader to comment on my first poem here - will try to discover how to request you as my first friend. Thank you for the visit to my page - a bit empty yet as I have to find out how to make a decent Profile.

    • WriteBeLight

      Wonderful images you have written.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Thank you and am pleased you enjoyed the imagery. I have yet to find my way around this site but do feel that I shall not be long sorting things out. Looking forward to reading your work.

        • WriteBeLight

          Thanks! And thanks for the friends invite 🙂 The site can be confusing in the beginning. So, just take your time. I had a hard time finding the Wall. I could not see it on my phone for some reason. But, I figured it out. Good luck and welcome! 🙂

        • Hopey_xx

          Love it! Great work 🙂

          • Fay Slimm.

            Ah - thank you for liking my fun-look at sunrise and for the comment -- personified imagery has always appealed to my writer's mind.

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            WELCOME FAY ~ Thanks for your first poem which is elegantly penned and beautifully illustrated. I enjoyed the playfulness of your poem ~ it is a battle we all face each morning.

            • Fay Slimm.

              I agree Brian - we all have to face our own dawnings - so pleased you liked the read.

            • Tony36

              Great write

              • Fay Slimm.

                Delighted you liked it Tony.

                • Tony36

                  W Welcome

                • Christina8

                  Welcome Fay! A wonderful poem! Hope to see more soon.-Christina

                  • Fay Slimm.

                    How lovely to feel so at home already here on this friendly site - thank you for your kind comment Chrissy and look forward to reading some of your work too.

                  • ron parrish aka wordman

                    lol,fay you have hit the jack pot on reviews,great first poem

                    • Fay Slimm.

                      Thank you for all your help to get here wordman - really appreciated.

                    • Augustus

                      Loved the delicate sensual innuendo in contrast to the crude surprise at the end. Welcome to MPS. You fit right in.

                      • Fay Slimm.

                        Gratitude for this perceptive comment Augustus - I am apt to throw in surprise at the end of my verses. Glad to fit into this friendly site.

                      • neharocks

                        Oh my god. Its beautiful and has powerful feelings.

                        • Fay Slimm.

                          Your comment shows the spirit of the poem got through and thank you for the invite for friend - I am delighted to respond and look forward to reading your work neharocks.

                        • Jamie

                          Good morning, Day!

                          • Jamie

                            I planned to read through your list, but this is so much fun I have to keep rereading!

                          • Neville

                            It was only a matter of time before I found these words, but then you know that, dont you.... I can understand entirely where you found your inspiration Fay.. I am convinced you have some of the best coastline anywhere on the planet and you certainly did it and gentle erotica justice the day you posted here...... Neville

                            • Fay Slimm.

                              Ha ha -- not everyone can see the passion exchanged between night and day but me being me I am aroused by the sequence of in and out pushings with strenuous comings so when completed the change more than La petit mort takes place..................... x

                              • Neville

                                I am darn near overcome..... z

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