I Day
always try waking Night by slowly kissing
his languid lips
with my first rays and twining pale light
round his lazy reclining.
I creep sinuously into Night's prostrated
stillness, glide through
his dreams and, seducing with soft
finger-movements,
I await his arousal.
Night without me would be inclined to
snooze time away
but I Day
douse his passion for inactivity.
An hour or two of early fore-play urges
on my inclination
before sunrise when work will call.
I feel my breast
heaving as dawns's dynamics surge
round my veins
so writhing with readiness I try again
but on failing
I Day
then push Night straight out of bed.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: January 13th, 2017 12:22
- Comment from author about the poem: Living in the beautiful county of Cornwall U.K. and next door to the sea I am ever finding beauty in coastal sunsets and seascapes. I hope you enjoy the fun-side of what I saw recently in dawn arising. A big welcome to my page and to this my first poem posted here. Thank you for the visit and any comment you may like to make.
- Category: Nature
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Comments11
Wonderfully written! -- phoenix
So pleased you enjoyed the write - good to have you Phoenix as the first reader to comment on my first poem here - will try to discover how to request you as my first friend. Thank you for the visit to my page - a bit empty yet as I have to find out how to make a decent Profile.
Wonderful images you have written.
Thank you and am pleased you enjoyed the imagery. I have yet to find my way around this site but do feel that I shall not be long sorting things out. Looking forward to reading your work.
Thanks! And thanks for the friends invite 🙂 The site can be confusing in the beginning. So, just take your time. I had a hard time finding the Wall. I could not see it on my phone for some reason. But, I figured it out. Good luck and welcome! 🙂
Love it! Great work 🙂
Ah - thank you for liking my fun-look at sunrise and for the comment -- personified imagery has always appealed to my writer's mind.
WELCOME FAY ~ Thanks for your first poem which is elegantly penned and beautifully illustrated. I enjoyed the playfulness of your poem ~ it is a battle we all face each morning.
I agree Brian - we all have to face our own dawnings - so pleased you liked the read.
Great write
Delighted you liked it Tony.
W Welcome
Welcome Fay! A wonderful poem! Hope to see more soon.-Christina
How lovely to feel so at home already here on this friendly site - thank you for your kind comment Chrissy and look forward to reading some of your work too.
lol,fay you have hit the jack pot on reviews,great first poem
Thank you for all your help to get here wordman - really appreciated.
Loved the delicate sensual innuendo in contrast to the crude surprise at the end. Welcome to MPS. You fit right in.
Gratitude for this perceptive comment Augustus - I am apt to throw in surprise at the end of my verses. Glad to fit into this friendly site.
Oh my god. Its beautiful and has powerful feelings.
Your comment shows the spirit of the poem got through and thank you for the invite for friend - I am delighted to respond and look forward to reading your work neharocks.
Good morning, Day!
I planned to read through your list, but this is so much fun I have to keep rereading!
It was only a matter of time before I found these words, but then you know that, dont you.... I can understand entirely where you found your inspiration Fay.. I am convinced you have some of the best coastline anywhere on the planet and you certainly did it and gentle erotica justice the day you posted here...... Neville
Ha ha -- not everyone can see the passion exchanged between night and day but me being me I am aroused by the sequence of in and out pushings with strenuous comings so when completed the change more than La petit mort takes place..................... x
I am darn near overcome..... z
Ha - - - Good !!
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