Notice of absence from Jooles
I disappear for months on end......just my life but I always come back!
I disappear for months on end......just my life but I always come back!
The man on the moon
Is always gone to soon
He never says goodbye
With a wink and a smile
He's there all the while
To greet me when bedtime is nigh
When I wake in the morning
Without any warning
My friend and his smile is gone
The sun's in his place
With a bright happy face
The man disappears with the dawn
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Love it! So fun that your daughter had a part in it.
~SS
Thank you....yeah she was funny when rhyming
Great poetry enjoyed it!
Thank you for your comment...its really appreciated
So pleasant a poem! -- phoenix
Thank you so much
WELCOME JOOLES ~ Great first poem with a great theme ! Children do have to learn about the SUN in the Day and the MOON at Night and Poetry is great way of learning. I love the rhyming pattern it makes it fun to recite ! Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
Thank you Brian, I certainly will!
Welcome to MPS Jooles! What a wonderful first poem. Made me smile! Thanks for sharing! Christina
Aw thank you..what a wonderful site full of talent and inspiration
We sure like to think so! Happy you joined!
Oh my god it's really beautiful poem. I got something from your writing. Its grace. How gracefully you have written it.
Aw thank you thats lovely to hear.
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