Jooles

The man on the moon


Notice of absence from Jooles
I disappear for months on end......just my life but I always come back!

The man on the moon

Is always gone to soon

He never says goodbye

 

With a wink and a smile

He's there all the while

To greet me when bedtime is nigh

 

When I wake in the morning 

Without any warning

My friend and his smile is gone

 

The sun's in his place

With a bright happy face

The man disappears with the dawn

Comments6

  • SunSearcher

    Love it! So fun that your daughter had a part in it.

    ~SS

    • Jooles

      Thank you....yeah she was funny when rhyming

    • rrodriguez

      Great poetry enjoyed it!

      • Jooles

        Thank you for your comment...its really appreciated

      • Phoenix8523

        So pleasant a poem! -- phoenix

        • Jooles

          Thank you so much

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          WELCOME JOOLES ~ Great first poem with a great theme ! Children do have to learn about the SUN in the Day and the MOON at Night and Poetry is great way of learning. I love the rhyming pattern it makes it fun to recite ! Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN

          • Jooles

            Thank you Brian, I certainly will!

          • Christina8

            Welcome to MPS Jooles! What a wonderful first poem. Made me smile! Thanks for sharing! Christina

            • Jooles

              Aw thank you..what a wonderful site full of talent and inspiration

              • Christina8

                We sure like to think so! Happy you joined!

              • neharocks

                Oh my god it's really beautiful poem. I got something from your writing. Its grace. How gracefully you have written it.

                • Jooles

                  Aw thank you thats lovely to hear.



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