I am the one who saw you that day
The one who always remembers
The one who opened his heart to you
The one who was happy to see you
The one who jumped up and down
The one who brought you surprises
The one who used to want to stop time
The one who God blessed
The one who found a treasure
I am the one who fell in love
Deeply in love with you
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Author:
rrodriguez (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Remembering the first years of our courtship.
- Category: Love
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Comments8
Beautifully expressed
Very sweet! Lovely words for one to hear.
I'd be willing to bet when you talk to your other half she will say that she initiated every move and you were none the wiser. That being said the poem points to that something special when we're in love, what really matters, and what we are all about.
To tell you the truth, my better half was so shy, I had to initiate every move. I loved her innocence.
I lost the bet. I owe you one. I remember the Spanish word for flirtatious, coqueto.
Very similar to the English coquettish. I don't know why this comes to mind. I imagine if your love was innocent she was not flirtatious.
Beautifully written and expressed
Beautiful write.
Thank you!
Just beautiful...
Well done...
Very sweet.
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