As I open the door and tried to escape,
A voice in my head said "Wait"
So, I walked back in and on the table, sat a white plate.
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Author:
Aaliyah Gisele (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem actually is true. I was angered by my brother. He had upset me. So, I go for a walk, but there was a voice that had stopped me and the voice said "wait". So I stepped foot back in my home and I turned around and there was a plate, and it had my favorites on it. The only way I would stay home, was if there was food on that table waiting for me to eat it.
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I want readers to understand that I love food.....Period. But when you put ALL of my faves on a plate, for ME, I be really thankful.
To the point. To esvape a known world in ones mind through poetry is a hreat first step. A white plate sits empty. But souls will be filled.y griend keep it up.
Do you like it ?
I did like it. Still do.
Aww thank you. I write expressive poetry
WELCOME LIYAH ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ short but it make a valuable point ! Things and remarks (especially within families) do upset us and sometimes we have to walk away ! But the morale of your poem is that we should be aware of all the blessings of home and return as soon as possible. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN.
Ohhh thank you !! Thanks for understanding. I think my family is worse than yours,
THANKS LIYAH ~ Families are Families ~ The Good ~ Bad ~ Ugly ! I try to see the GOOD in my Family and forgive the BAD & the UGLY ~ Every Blessing ~ BRIAN
I'm Aaliyah by the way
Thanks for correction AALIYAH ~ thanks for being my MPS FRIEND ~ Yours BRIAN
You can call me LIYAH. It's my nickname silly !!! 😸
Thanks LIYAH ~ MPS is a very informal site ~ so nicknames are ~ OK ~ BRIAN ~ That's my name & nickname !
Ok lol. Poems help me express
Aww
Awesome
Hey
Hi
Long time long text
What u mean?
It's been a while since we talked
?
It has. Now it's the second of the new month.
True
Hey
Hello hey hi
It's nice to meet me
That you can't deny
Thankssss
How are you?
I’m fine. I’m doing very well, in school, in my work. I’m trying to bring up my gpa just a little but more because it’s a 1.3 and it’s always been that way. Even though, I worked hard. I admit, I didn’t do so good my 9th grade yea in high school but only because I was going through something...
But , to answer your question, I’m ok. I’ve been fine.
What grade are you in now?
Guess
I Don't know how old you are so I have no idea
12th
Cool. What do you want to do in life
It’s a lot I want to do but to be more specific, I want to study hair, just hair, hairstylist. I always say cosmetologist but it’s really hairstylist because I just want to do HAIR
There's nothing wrong with that. Maybe one day I will let you practice on my hair. Lol
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