Silence
rolling through my brain,
as fast,
as a fast moving train.
through
the portals,
of my mind,taking me back,
back in time
where
memories run deep,
deep into my soul,
a place,only i can go.
like
a waterfall,
falling from my mind
taking me back,back in time...
- Author: Ron parrish (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: January 17th, 2017 22:34
- Category: Love
- Views: 23
Comments6
Good flow to this verse which echoes the image and number you chose wordman -- - the clever repeat of certain words expresses a fast-train movement so well. - Great read.
thank you fay !
Like the last lines, in particular 🙂
thanks,it just kinda flowed out !
beautiful piece, indeed...
thank you n b
A really nice poem. Nice touch with the image.
thank you miss christina
Mind is just like a fast moving train. But silence rules over this to stabilize. In silence memories run deep in to the soul. Very beautifully penned poem!
thank you very much !
awwww one of my favorites of yours ron!
wrote this one a couple weeks ago ,i think,didn`t post it for a while.thank you for reading
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