Silence

ron parrish aka wordman

Silence

rolling through my brain,

as fast,

as a fast moving train.

through

the portals,

of my mind,taking me back,

back in time

where

memories run deep,

deep into my soul,

a place,only i can go.

a waterfall,

falling from my mind

taking me back,back in time...

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Fay Slimm. January 18th, 2017 00:14
Good flow to this verse which echoes the image and number you chose wordman -- - the clever repeat of certain words expresses a fast-train movement so well. - Great read.
- ron parrish aka wordmanJanuary 18th, 2017 00:18
  thank you fay !
WriteBeLight January 18th, 2017 06:47
Like the last lines, in particular 🙂
- ron parrish aka wordmanJanuary 18th, 2017 08:54
  thanks,it just kinda flowed out !
NB January 18th, 2017 07:05
beautiful piece, indeed...
- ron parrish aka wordmanJanuary 18th, 2017 08:55
  thank you n b
Christina8 January 18th, 2017 08:09
A really nice poem. Nice touch with the image.
- ron parrish aka wordmanJanuary 18th, 2017 08:56
  thank you miss christina
Pintu Mahakul January 20th, 2017 20:46
Mind is just like a fast moving train. But silence rules over this to stabilize. In silence memories run deep in to the soul. Very beautifully penned poem!
- ron parrish aka wordmanJanuary 20th, 2017 20:50
  thank you very much !
janetaylor January 21st, 2017 09:18
awwww one of my favorites of yours ron!
- ron parrish aka wordmanJanuary 21st, 2017 15:54
  wrote this one a couple weeks ago ,i think,didn`t post it for a while.thank you for reading

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