The wind was hollowing, as I passed your heart.
For the night was dim, and we were lost in the dark.
I screamed for a savior, for your souls to remain.
But you took a final breath; letting go of all pain.
Small smile on your cracked lips; ranting once about forgotten love.
Well now your lost, and I remember you above.
I can't remember what the time was, when the moon feel to catch your shell.
I can only remember how I violently fell.
The colour that was once your ambiance glow.
Now buried under six feet of rotting snow.
Every night when the wind screams.
I wake in fear, wishing for it to all be a tortuous dream...
But never dose the haze of your blood lift from my sight.
Never do I seem to find the clarity of the ending light.
I lost you so long ago, when we were merely just drowning in each other's love.
And not a day has gone by, when I've pleaded to meet you again, high above....
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Wilting moon (
Offline) - Published: January 18th, 2017 04:33
- Category: Love
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Comments3
Well written and expressed
Thanks. Tony. Appreciate you reading
Welcome
WELCOME GEORGIA ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ~ It is elegantly penned in rhyming couplets ~ but the subject of LOST LOVE is quite tragic ~ it made me sad I trust you found it cathartic. As I get older I have faced the death of Friends and Family and it is never easy to say goodbye. If it is a very special Lover the it is inconsolable. Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)`
Thank you so much, Brian. This was more of just a loss of life or experience I had encountered. Thank you for reading
You've always had it in you to produce a great poem. This is no exception. Well done, my friend!
Thanks you dearly, Jarid! You have always supported my writings
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