Dreams of friendship
Dreams of warmth
Dreams of kindness
Waking alone
Dreams of adventure
Dreams of fun
Dreams of hope
Waking with none
As I get worse my dreams get better
And soon I'll want to dream forever
So in my bed I'll stay and sleep
Until I finally take the leap
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Author:
Naeners (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Just so you know I am not currently suicidal. This is a poem of how I felt at a time when I was considering killing myself and I just slept to escape reality. I hope you like it. I am not new to writing poetry but I am new to sharing it so please be honest about what you think.
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
I honestly interpreted this poem completely different, but maybe that's better since you say you wrote it at a different time.. Anyway I like it very very much 🙂
Well thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. That's one of the things I most enjoy about poetry, sometimes it can be interpreted in thousands of ways 🙂
This poem felt so real. I can understand the emotiond of when you wrote this, all the feeling of when I was the same came back. However this poem also made me smile for seeing how beautiful emotional can be presented when released in a safe and calming way. Love it
Thank you so much! I am so happy you enjoyed it and that it made you feel something!
WELCOME NAENERS ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem. I love the structure ~ rhyme & rhythm ~ but the Subject is challenging. My advice would be "Always Look before you Leap" "Count your Blessings before you Plunge." Thanks for sharing. Please check my POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN (UK).
Knew exactly what the poem was about - as I have also felt this way in the past. I like it - keep sharing. I am also very new to the site and to writing poems too.
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