Notice of absence from Tristan Robert Lange
Friends, Iโm doing my best to keep up with comments. ๐ Iโm still current on my own poems and first replies on othersโ work, but this season has been a bit of a twister. Figured Iโd drop a quick note so you donโt think Iโve vanished or gone flaky.
Read. Write. Rise. Realize. ๐ค๐๐ค
Friends, Iโm doing my best to keep up with comments. ๐ Iโm still current on my own poems and first replies on othersโ work, but this season has been a bit of a twister. Figured Iโd drop a quick note so you donโt think Iโve vanished or gone flaky.
Read. Write. Rise. Realize. ๐ค๐๐ค
The morning is empty,
Silent and hollow,
Yet, full with hope
Of things not to be.
Awakened from sleep
but not yet conscious,
The mind stirs up
A cup of anticipation.
In the frigid air
The jagged winter bites.
Its teeth of ice tear
Through warm, tender flesh.
What will be, alas,
Is yet to be known.
The horror of uncertainty
Becomes a doomed reality.
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Author:
Tristan Robert Lange (
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Comments2
A superb piece - it reads so well
Thanks for your feedback!
brilliant.. the last two lines really make it ๐
Thank you! ๐
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