You smile to me,
But Imma walk away from you.
Not because I don’t love you… or you mistreat me. No!
But because you smile to me,
And him,
And him,
And him.
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Author:
Edward_McLucky (
Offline) - Published: January 20th, 2017 13:11
- Comment from author about the poem: This is not a poem and I don't dare to call myself a poet :o I've had a look on a few poems in this site and figured that mine doesn't match. It just has a meaning in my personal life. I hope that this "poem" means nothing to you, cause god knows it hurts if it does.
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WELCOME EDWARD ~ Thanks for your first "poem" I trust you found it cathartic>. It is a poem because i has STRUCTURE ~ Lines & rhythm ~ modern poems don't have to rhyme no more ! It also has a message which I am sure many of the GUYS & GIRLS can empathise with. I my case sometimes (along the way) I have met a GIRL who I am so in love with that I stopped ~ looking at ~ phoning ~ texting ~ dating etc OTHER GIRLS and desired only her ~ when she feels the same way about me it is HEAVEN ~ BUT (as you describe) when she is not "satisfied" with me and continues to "smile" at HIM & HIM & HIM ~ then it is HELL ! Thanks for caring ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK).
Well written and expressed great write
Thank you both for being so nice. Glad to have found this website.
While there is no love this takes you away. You smile and I go far. Jealously does this. Wonderfully expressed poem is shared here.
Thanks in advance Pintu. Thank you for taking the time.
NIce poem but dont be jealous that she or helooked at im, him andhim maybe she or he wanted to be fo certain that you were the one 🙂
I think she knows why it stopped. If she doesn't, it makes ME wonder. Thank you
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