Bleed

ron parrish aka wordman



 

Bleed

Stab me slow, watch me bleed,,
is it my pain,that you need.
you stabbed me in the back,
then you walked away,
and here i stand,still bleeding today.

I don't know why you hurt me so,
i don't know why you turned so cold,
you closed all doors,you return my mail,
do you enjoy putting me through hell.

Do you really believe those lies?
you didn't even ask me ,i was surprised
do you really know me ? i don't think you do,
if you did! you know i would never be untrue...

 

image by jane taylor hardy

  • Author: Ron parrish (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 22nd, 2017 12:10
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • janetaylor

    wow ~ incredibly passionate write ron! i loved it. the words that you used perfectly mirror the hearts that are hurt in unrequited love. the music is divine and thank you for using my image 🙂

  • Christina8

    Beautiful image paired with song and then a wonderful yet heartbreaking poem. Makes me treasure my love. Great job!--Christina

    • ron parrish aka wordman

      well you know sometimes there's a flip side to love,
      but making up is fun,lol

    • Tony36

      Well written and expressed great write

    • Jarid

      Great flow to this piece. Enjoyed the read.

    • Pintu Mahakul

      Stab me slow, watch me bleed,,! What an amazing expression is shared here really. We do not believe lie. We believe in truth. Image is so beautiful.

    • Augustus

      Hard to watch someone bleed, hurt, especially after they have been deceived. Well done.

    • WriteBeLight

      Your questions are so real and come truly from a broken heart. I could feel that. Poignant.

      • ron parrish aka wordman

        my motto is,if you can`t feel it,don`t write it !
        thank you for reading,i appreciate your visit !

        • WriteBeLight

          Great motto and you are very welcome! I enjoyed the visit!

        • Aamina

          This is so realistic. I really like how your poetry at title link well, that's one aspect of poetry that I really find hard. Great read



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