Pintu Mahakul

Happy Birthday Fay Madam

A pure love dwells in Child’s E-mail to God,

I am love, autumn comes running soon to nod.

Tribute to love is felt in poem diamond dance,

Angels are forever coming home getting chance.


So many beautiful poems you have written more,

Few I have mentioned above in my vision shore.

Precious moment of your Birthday has come near,

Father God will sure fill your life in fortune, cheer.


Deer dances in forest, cloud dances in sky we feel,

God will gift you his garden, flower improves zeal.

Dealing new hope you cope with time, tells us mind,

Fay Madam you are Mother Poetess, you are kind.


Time declares you are ageless, wind whispers joy,

God brings peace for you, poetic heaven you enjoy.

Cornwall is Ceremonial County in United Kingdom,

Philosophical poetesses you are, you reflect wisdom.


I am wishing you Fay Slimm Madam happy birthday,

Every workday blooms for you, for you ever I pray.

Stay happy ever, crossing seven oceans I reach there,

My mind is merged with God; I hope he will take care.


© Pintu Mahakul, 22 January 2017. All rights reserved.

Note: This poem is written as a birthday tribute for Fay Slimm Madam.


  • ron parrish aka wordman

    a touching and beautiful write my friend

    • Pintu Mahakul

      Thank you very much for your kind feedback on this poem.

    • WriteBeLight

      That is such a great poem you have shared!

      • Pintu Mahakul

        Thank you very much for your kind feedback on this poem.

        • WriteBeLight

          You are very welcome Pintu! :)

        • janetaylor

          Pintu ~ What a wonderful and gorgeous tribute to our dear poet friend Fay. She is an amazing writer as are you. I really enjoyed the imagery....especially about the deer dancing in the forest! Great job.

          • Pintu Mahakul

            Thank you very much madam for your kind feedback on this poem.

          • Fay Slimm.

            I am truly honoured dear friend to be the recipient of your kind birthday remembrance along with such an eloquent appraisal of poetry I posted -- your reference to the beautiful coastal area of Cornwall U.K. is most appreciated too - thank you Pintu for this very special and unexpected tribute which I shall always treasure.

            • Pintu Mahakul

              Thank you very much for reading this poem once again and leaving your valuable opinion.

            • RAJ NANDY

              A very fitting tribute to Fay, who was our leading & a veteran poet on that Swedish poetry site '' for the last six years before the site closed. I came to know her from our 'Poemhunter' days even earlier. Thanks for sharing my friend. - Raj, New Delhi.

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