what's the rush is what i ask myself sometimes
but yet i rushed myself trying to be an adult just to live it out like the rest of you
am i a bad person for enjoying all this cannabis
because all i want is my love ones to be happy with me
im to young to be doing this
im to young yo be acting like this
im to young to be stressing about this
but the inner me like doing what i do best
my sweetess is mistaken for fleurtacious, which i cant deny sass is who i am
"you dont lose you learn"
but if i really think about it i lost myself trying to be someone im not ,in order to please my mother who wants me to be Something im not
im a voice who cant be heard because all my thoughts & opinions are ignorant to small minds
i am what i believe even though it might just be all in mu dreams
R.os
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Author:
olverasama (
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WELCOME OLVERA ~ Thanks for your first poem which is both a confession and a resolution ~ I like that. It is well written and presents a clear message of not wanting to "conform" to by sassy and meet others (and Mother's) expectations ~ but wanting TO BE YOURSELF ! My hope for you that in future you will follow your own inner feelings ~ of what you want to be ~ and not conformist just to please others ! Every Blessing & Success in the future ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
Thanyou i appreciate it .
Welcome to MPS Olvera - your poem of how life can be looked at makes interesting reading and gives much food for thought on what conformity means. Thank you for sharing it.
Thankyou!
Well written and expressed Great write
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