In His Eyes She Saw Herself

Love stood before her

Tall and confident
Untarnished by
superficial tendencies
birth into society

in his ability to
remain true

Love stood before her

Admiring flaws of
unique beauty

Without a single word
or touch

Love stood before her

deep desire that
pooled in his eyes


She had
never seen a more
beautiful reflection of herself


  • Author: Corey (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 27th, 2017 13:09
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this about 6 months ago while thinking about how beautiful someone is through the eyes of the one who loves them. I hope it's enjoyed as much as it was for me to create it. :)
  • Category: Love
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  • WriteBeLight

    Very nice approach!

    • Corey

      Thank you, WritebeLight!

    • Tony36

      Well written and expressed Great write

    • janetaylor

      soft and ethereal lovely write!❤️

      • Corey

        Hey Jane, Thank you for the lovely response!

      • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

        Of love reflected in the eyes, yeah love is in the eyes of the lover like beauty. Cool idea poem. Lovely and sweetly romantic. I like your phrasing, pooled in the eyes, . Kudos. Nice to meet u fellow poetess.

        • Corey

          Hi S. Zaynab, Yes, love is amazing! Thank you reading and nice to meet you, too!

        • Beautyqueen46

          Very touching loved this one....°¿°....

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