Corey

In His Eyes She Saw Herself

Love stood before her

Tall and confident
Untarnished by
superficial tendencies
birth into society

Magnificent
in his ability to
remain true

Love stood before her

Admiring flaws of
unique beauty

Without a single word
or touch

Love stood before her

Reflecting
deep desire that
pooled in his eyes

and

She had
never seen a more
beautiful reflection of herself


 ©Cj

Comments5

  • WriteBeLight

    Very nice approach!

    • Corey

      Thank you, WritebeLight!

    • Tony36

      Well written and expressed Great write

    • janetaylor

      soft and ethereal lovely write!❤️

      • Corey

        Hey Jane, Thank you for the lovely response!

      • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

        Of love reflected in the eyes, yeah love is in the eyes of the lover like beauty. Cool idea poem. Lovely and sweetly romantic. I like your phrasing, pooled in the eyes, . Kudos. Nice to meet u fellow poetess.

        • Corey

          Hi S. Zaynab, Yes, love is amazing! Thank you reading and nice to meet you, too!

        • Beautyqueen46

          Very touching loved this one....°¿°....



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