Love has now faded
In its place Hate is traded
Death to lights spark
Now a heart lonely and dark
From this now dark place
Does thy torment embrace
Forsaken and now forgotten
Thy love withered and rotten
Darkness does now rule
Thy hatred unbearable and cruel
But fear not thy blinded treachery
From loves grave I pardon thee.
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Author:
notapoet (
Offline) - Published: January 29th, 2017 11:38
- Comment from author about the poem: Ok friends I need a little help with the title, any and all suggestions welcome.
- Category: Forgiveness
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Comments4
You navigate in the world of words and transcribe them on the page with wisdom. I loved it...
Thank you..
Title- Frgotten and Forgiven.
This is very deep and very special. So well written.
wow thanks Augustus I like the sound of that title, appreciate the feedback....
i agree with kat....youareapoet :0) beautifully woven words....only a poet can title his/her work....but the thought came to me.....Darkness Fades. in any event a gorgeous piece my friend!
Thank you so much for your kind words and feedback, means a lot....
The only title
I can think is..
Forgiven !!
Really beautiful
Poem NAP...
Thank you PHR...
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