Took a sleeping pill so this may not make sense

P.H.Rose

Just thought of a title.. sleeping pill poem.


In A Time to laugh and in a time to cry,
It's just so difficult to keep your eyes dry.
Just when you think you've got it all sorted,
Along come a problem, then good will is aborted.
Happiness is near almost impossible to keep,
When a bill through the door or loss of some sheep.
You just knew the road, would have a few bumps,
But you never thought life, could kick out great lumps.
You knew that this life, could deal you a blow,
but didn't know how, far it would go.
walk a rocky road or walk a smooth path,
In the end It's still just a ....walk...

  • Author: P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 1st, 2017 20:12
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just took a pill to get me to sleep These words just came to me Can barely keep my eyes open I don't now if this poem makes sense, good will to all, I'm off to Sleep now....nighty nite!!!
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  • Michael Edwards

    Does it matter if it makes sense? It imparts a situation in some great writing and that's all that matters. If that makes sense !

  • WriteBeLight

    I know you are probably sleeping right now, but I liked it 🙂

  • Jooles

    Yeah I liked it as well....we've all lost sleep over worries....to take a sleeping pill and forget for a few hours. Well that's what I took from it

    • P.H.Rose

      Ha ha, bang on jooles.
      Thank you..



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