99 bottles of beer on the wall oh yes 99 bottles of beer
O Daddy why did you have to drink them all
98 bottles of beer on the wall and chase dear Mommy
down the hall in a drunken rage she hit her head and had a fall
all for 97 bottles of beer on the wall and then she was dead when her head hit on the wall
96 bottles beer on the wall oh yes 96 bottles of beer on the wall
the wall could not sustain them at all ~ oh yes they had to shatter and fall
95 bottles of beer on the floor 95 bottles of beer on the floor
95 bottles on the floor I had to pickup the shattered glass off the floor
94 years i faced after the war! 94 years I face after the war
they made me a sentence offer 93 year + i day off for good behavior
then I asked what life are th we talking ? For I never have a real life
So I said let's just end it right here? After all i never ever really had was the angry and the abuse
any way all I ever had was the anger and abuse So I said fuck it just give me the needle.
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- Comment from author about the poem: this is about child abuse so is there some vulgar language. so if you cant\\\' handle light vulgar language\r\nplease do not read this piece please do not read this piece. and the author ww is strongly against a child reading\r\nthis piece.
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Very graphic WILLY and you clothe REAL CHILD ABUSE in a fun song ! In the UK it is TEN GREEN BOTTLES hanging on the WALL ! 99 Bottles sounds like an overkill ~ BUT ~ I guess for you it really was ! Every Blessing in you present (more pleasant life ?) BRIAN
If this is a reflection of something personally you've been through..... I hope writing is giving you a release and some inner peace. Well expressed and so raw x
O my new girl friend you must rely on you r beauty for it will serve better than your of the con game I just pulled the wool and coned you of your l heartfelt mecer and left you weeping for this a total BS story
Lol well that's a good thing.....writing is to be believed
Powerful message my friend great write
You are cor rect but hold up on the parade this total BS stortiiti and you of all people fell for it hook line and sinker
quite frankly I am surprise you have embraced it all ! but as I said
I am surprise you fell for this line of BS tony you know I love like brother from diff mother. but I tank you for the read
I'm hoping everything is ok with you ww! I've missed your fantasy writings!
Different approach to the topic. Did not have a problem with the F-Bomb. Glad you are getting your ducks in a row and back to writing. Tough and tumble last line. Great drama!
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