99 bottles of beer on the wall

willyweed

 99 bottles of beer on the wall oh yes 99 bottles of beer

O Daddy why did you have to drink them all

98 bottles of beer on the wall and chase dear Mommy

down the hall in a drunken rage she hit her head and had a fall

all for 97 bottles of beer on  the wall and  then she was dead when her head hit  on  the wall

96 bottles beer on the wall oh yes 96 bottles of beer on the wall

the wall could not sustain them at all ~ oh yes they had to shatter and fall

95 bottles of beer on the floor  95 bottles of beer on the floor

95 bottles on  the floor I had to pickup the shattered glass off the floor

94 years i faced after the war! 94 years I face after the war

they made me a sentence offer 93 year +  i day off for good behavior

then I asked what life are  th we talking ? For I  never have a real life 

So I said let's just end it right here?  After all i never ever  really  had was  the angry and  the abuse

any way all I ever had was the  anger and abuse So I said fuck it just give me the needle.

 

  • Author: willyweed (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 2nd, 2017 14:44
  • Comment from author about the poem: this is about child abuse so is there some vulgar language. so if you cant\\\' handle light vulgar language\r\nplease do not read this piece please do not read this piece. and the author ww is strongly against a child reading\r\nthis piece.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 33
Get a free collection of Classic Poetry ↓

Receive the ebook in seconds 50 poems from 50 different authors


Comments +

Comments5

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Very graphic WILLY and you clothe REAL CHILD ABUSE in a fun song ! In the UK it is TEN GREEN BOTTLES hanging on the WALL ! 99 Bottles sounds like an overkill ~ BUT ~ I guess for you it really was ! Every Blessing in you present (more pleasant life ?) BRIAN

  • Jooles

    If this is a reflection of something personally you've been through..... I hope writing is giving you a release and some inner peace. Well expressed and so raw x

    • willyweed

      O my new girl friend you must rely on you r beauty for it will serve better than your of the con game I just pulled the wool and coned you of your l heartfelt mecer and left you weeping for this a total BS story

      • Jooles

        Lol well that's a good thing.....writing is to be believed

      • Tony36

        Powerful message my friend great write

        • willyweed

          You are cor rect but hold up on the parade this total BS stortiiti and you of all people fell for it hook line and sinker
          quite frankly I am surprise you have embraced it all ! but as I said
          I am surprise you fell for this line of BS tony you know I love like brother from diff mother. but I tank you for the read

        • Christina8

          I'm hoping everything is ok with you ww! I've missed your fantasy writings!

        • WriteBeLight

          Different approach to the topic. Did not have a problem with the F-Bomb. Glad you are getting your ducks in a row and back to writing. Tough and tumble last line. Great drama!



        To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.