HER EPITAPH YET WRITTEN
With latent forces rooted deep
and hurt repressed yet feigned as joy,
the penitential tears that flowed
were stemmed by resolution formed
and still in flesh
she lives upon this noble earth.
- Author: Michael Edwards ( Offline)
- Published: February 8th, 2017 01:11
- Comment from author about the poem: A short one - I leave others to interpret plus another watercolour.
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments4
Invokes much thought Michael. Excellent watercolor.
Thanks a lot WBL - not even sure if I know what it's saying but the words t seemed to come to me and to work with an air of mystery which I liked .
Wonderful write
Thank you Tony
Welcome
I love the watercolor! The poem evokes much thought (i see WBL already said that--well, I agree!) 🙂 Very well done!
Thanks Christina - i f ever I get to the bottom of it I'll let you know.
To me this feels like someone in remorse trying to cope and mend their ways. "She lives,' yet I question is this a person in truth? Well it's pretty surreal, but it makes one think, and reads smooth and flowing. Nice art. - Phil A.
Thanks phil. I had the line Still in Flesh in my mind for quite some time and managed to weave it in. In fact whenever someone says How are You I tend to reply either Bits of Me are Okay or nowadays Still in Flesh both of which seem to get some sort of reaction. Now I can see a poem here - will work on it tonight !!
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