To me, the moon is a beautiful thing.
Then add all the stars around it, They're there to light up the night.
"The sun loved the moon so much,
it died a little every night to let the moon breathe"
But the sun didn't know that she was wasting her love.
The moon had all the stars and the stars love the moon as well.
The star's alone and only care to the moon.
its sad to realize that the one thing you love
could leave you as a memory within a moment.
the moon is the king of the night, the sun's the queen at full bright.
She wants to love him, and she does indeed. she wants him to love her, and he leaves without delay.
Earths perfection waiting t be destroyed, and it does, especially when it bleeds.
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Author:
Estrella Estrada (
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- Comment from author about the poem: there is always going to be that person when you would do anything for. You'd take a bullet for that special someone, little did you know, that special someone pulled the trigger.
- Category: Sad
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GRACIAS ESTRELLA ~ FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ~ Because my Dad is El Greco I understood and enjoyed it ! YES the MOON is beautiful but the MOON relies on the SUN for her reflected brilliance. Each night the SUN bleeds a little to bestow brilliance on the MOON. This true of all our relationships ~ LOVE demands that we all bleed a little. It's OK when our love is reciprocated but if not its is very SAD ~ LOVE'S LABOUR LOST ! Thanks for sharing and caring ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
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