Life is just an optical illusion,
It shows you what you want to see.
That, simply is why I live in a delusion.
Sometimes sanity calls,
But to come would only be an intrusion.
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Author:
brina.grant1368 (
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- Published: February 12th, 2017 09:09
- Comment from author about the poem: Something small and simple I threw together for my first actually posted poem.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 18
Comments3
Small, simple but very good. Well done.
Thank you guys for reading it. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and can see where i'm coming from.
WELCOME BRINA ~ Love both the brevity and insanity of your opener. It is enigmatic poets like you that this site needs ~ more please. Love the rhyme pattern axaxa which makes it groovy to recite ~ I'm a performance poet ! Thanks for sharing Yours BRIAN (UK) On reflection your name BRINA is an anagram of mine ! I sometimes sign off as BRAIN (wishful thinking ?). Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
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