Augustus

Piel Canela

She stopped,

A flick of a curl.

I hesitated.

What kind of girl?

Ah–Music, Merengue,

Alluring cinnamon skin–

Murmurs all over

of love again.

 

 

Augustus / Folsom LA / February 2017

Comments5

  • rrodriguez

    "of love again" Augustus, you are certainly most blessed. Beautiful piece.

    • Augustus

      Thanks my brother. I count them every day.

    • TylerHathaway

      Love this short yet to the point ..one who uses less words speaks with their heart fantastic best regards my friend x

      • Augustus

        Thanks Tyler. I've got a long winded one I'm working on, however. But I do like brevity. I spend half my time figuring out how to cut words out.

      • Fay Slimm.

        A short-line sensation of romantic intrigue - great read.

        • Augustus

          You got it! And the intro from the author denotes this as "fantasy". At my age the lady in the photo would barely give me the time of day. Thanks.

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thanks "A" ~ A very sensuous poem ameliorated with a perfect picture. I love the taste and scent of Cinnamon ~ BUT ~ the taste and scent of "Piel Canela" would put me on a higher Astral Plane ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN

          • Augustus

            Yes, she is out of this world. Thanks.

          • WriteBeLight

            Wonderful Augustus! You just continue to amaze us all with your way with words!!

            • Augustus

              that just floors me. Thanks.



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