I touch the rain
Like drops of acid
Of memories past
Burning streaming down
Across moonbeams across grass
Vivid as the nightmares they spawn
I touch the rain
Velvety across dark lips
Reminding me of you and i
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Author:
Lolomgwtf (
Offline) - Published: February 13th, 2017 05:13
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Comments3
Nice write!
Criticism: Use more diverse vocabulary!
Thank you. I don't usually publish on the internet but wanted to try this site out with just a little poem. Thanks.
You're welcome! I've been using sites for a while now, and they've really helped me as a writer! I'm sure you'll think so too if you dedicate yourself 🙂
WELCOME LOLO ~ Thanks for you first poem ~ nice style ~ three neat triplets ! Personally I liked the repeat of I TOUCH THE RAIN a very evocative line in a very poignant poem. Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Please check my Poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
Great write
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