VALENTINES DAY ~ FIVE LOVE SENRYU

BRIAN & ANGELA

LOVE  is Gentle ~ free

from strife ~ God please send me 

a very gentle Wife !

 

LOVE is Patient ~ Love

is Kind ~ the style of Girl ~ I

always have in mind !

 

LOVE puts others First 

not "ME FIRST" cursed ! My Lover

Best above all other !

 

LOVE is Satisfaction

not "ME WANT MORE" distraction

LOVE is True in action !

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love to ALL ~ BRIAN

 

These Senryu are based on Paul's Letter to Corinth (chapter 13)

 

  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 14th, 2017 02:57
  • Comment from author about the poem: In his first letter to the Church at Corinth (Greece) The Apostle Paul out lined the principles of Christian Love (see the picture at the top of the Poem. It is s perfect description of how TRUE LOVE should operate ! Not just on VALENTINES DAY but every day of the YEAR ~ AMEN ! Comments welcome ~ LOVE to ALL ~ BRIAN
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  • Tony36

    Well written and expressed Great write

  • Shakerite

    Love is how the beholder perceives it to be.
    There are no rules .
    It's all subjective.

    Good read my friend .

  • WriteBeLight

    Hope your find your gentle Valentine Dear Brian!

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks HONEY ~ My current GF is very gentle with me (and I with her !) ~ which is nice ! Thanks for reading ~ Valentine Hugs ~ BRIAN

    • Christina8

      Wonderful senryu! May your Valentines Day love last throughout the year! Chapter 13 is a wonderful place to get your muse from." Love is patient and kind".....Job very well done! Love it! Hugs Christina

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks CHRIS ~ I do my best with these classical Japanese poetic forms ~ pleased you liked them ! Saint Valentine Hugs ~ BRIAN



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