LOVE is Gentle ~ free
from strife ~ God please send me
a very gentle Wife !
LOVE is Patient ~ Love
is Kind ~ the style of Girl ~ I
always have in mind !
LOVE puts others First
not "ME FIRST" cursed ! My Lover
Best above all other !
LOVE is Satisfaction
not "ME WANT MORE" distraction
LOVE is True in action !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love to ALL ~ BRIAN
These Senryu are based on Paul's Letter to Corinth (chapter 13)
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: In his first letter to the Church at Corinth (Greece) The Apostle Paul out lined the principles of Christian Love (see the picture at the top of the Poem. It is s perfect description of how TRUE LOVE should operate ! Not just on VALENTINES DAY but every day of the YEAR ~ AMEN ! Comments welcome ~ LOVE to ALL ~ BRIAN
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Well written and expressed Great write
Love is how the beholder perceives it to be.
There are no rules .
It's all subjective.
Good read my friend .
Hope your find your gentle Valentine Dear Brian!
Thanks HONEY ~ My current GF is very gentle with me (and I with her !) ~ which is nice ! Thanks for reading ~ Valentine Hugs ~ BRIAN
Wonderful senryu! May your Valentines Day love last throughout the year! Chapter 13 is a wonderful place to get your muse from." Love is patient and kind".....Job very well done! Love it! Hugs Christina
Thanks CHRIS ~ I do my best with these classical Japanese poetic forms ~ pleased you liked them ! Saint Valentine Hugs ~ BRIAN
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