My A team..
I have a team around me, they look after my every need,
Their names are not uncommon, even help me when I feed.(appetite)
First up is the leader, his name is CONFIDENCE,
When I lack a bit of courage, he makes me then see sense.
Next up is my little girl CONSCIENCE, the baby of the team,
She maybe but a small thing, but holds me if I lean.
I also have my warrior, his name is SELF BELIEF,
When days are hard to follow, he gives me some relief.
In this group is little INTELLIGENCE, though again not very large,
But add him to my CONFIDENCE, he then will just run wild.
Last here is the old man, he'd not leave despite a fall,
He's not at all conceited , with PRIDE I can walk tall.
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P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: we all need a little help, This is my A team... There are other members And at some point in the Future, I'll reveal them...
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A+++ plus grade on your very great poem P.H.
Ha ha, thank you WBL..
A for AWESOME love it
Thank you Tony..
Welcome
Great write PHR, loved it!
Thank you NAP,
Coming from you
It's the real deal..
An honour ..
Thanks for this FRIEND ~ It is something all Members can relate to ! We all have inner personality traits which help us get through the day. Their qualitative and quantitative influence is different for each of us. I have some of each of your five and others besides !(Self) Confidence ~ (Clear) Conscience ~ Self Belief (very important !) ~ Intelligence (and Wisdom) very different from mere Knowledge ! And Pride ~ Self Worth in my book is a virtue not a vice ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
Thank you Brian
Great comment
As per...
sounds perfect. a very good write and a good sense of rhythm.
Thank you Kevin
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