Minds touch and
Borrow thoughts,
Thirsting for the ill
Of those love lost.
Searching for truth
In relationships.
Finding pain
On another's lips.
Unconsciously
Playing games,
Seeking cerebrums
Perchance to tame.
Conscious thoughts,
Steered by hearts,
Can be brought
To comfort.
Within, and
With a Friend.
(To be continued, see Another Touch)
Augustus / Redlands, CA / Summer 1987
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- Comment from author about the poem: I dusted off this poem I wrote 30 years ago. Why do some end up in abusive relations and how to avoid such? Using some of the same lines the poem was rewritten in 2016, entitled Another Touch. (to be published)
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Wonderful Augustus. Look forward to the next entry.
I took the old one and changed it some. Thanks for reading
Thanks for sharing "A" ~ We can touch each other in all sorts of ways and ~ as it is Valentines Week ~ we all love a sensuous / romantic touch ! A cerebral touch is a very interesting concept and its use has greatly increased with Poetic sites in cyberland ! However When I'm walking my Baby back home ~ hand in hand ~ we often share our thoughts cerebrally. Looking forward to Another Touch ~ tomorrow ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
Yes we reach out with our minds.
This is an amazing poem, Augustus! Looking forward to "another touch"!
You are too kind.
'87, C'mon it was only 30 years ago. Where does the time go, when you're having fun?
I swear, people in a relationship, can sometimes read each other's mind. My wife and I do it a lot. She'll answer my question before I've asked it. So, maybe , "minds touch." Lovely poem, waiting for the sequel. - Phil A.
Love the enthusiastic comment.
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