WITHIN THE SANCTION OF THE WALLS
Within the sanction of the walls
that posture proud in majesty,
no lights in lonely windows show
beneath the timber overhang.
The silver line of lunar rays
peer shy across the girdling grounds
where flower beds in clear distinction
display their flora to the night.
With shadows not dispersed by lamps
their footsteps grind on gravelled paths,
in words no humbler audience hears
their voices spoken to the wind.
Her spectral smile belies
the unbefitting language used
and withered flowers define her mood
endowed in rayless shadows form.
And deep behind her gibbous eyes
the shadows of her self esteem
lie trapped in unrequited love
within the sanction of the walls.
Michael Edwards © February 2017
- Author: Michael Edwards ( Offline)
- Published: February 18th, 2017 09:15
- Comment from author about the poem: Back again - this one written on scraps of paper in between the David Hockney exhibition in Tate Britain and attending a legal hearing at the Royal courts of Justice in London. Plus another abstract.
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments4
Absolutely beautiful Michael on both accounts.
Thanks so much WBL
I've heard many praiseworthy compliments on the value of "moonshine," but none spoken as eloquently as this, but then you mean moon light. So here's some praise: "The silver line of lunar rays," Their footsteps grind on gravelled paths,""and deep beyond her gibbous eyes," are unique and beautiful lines only an artist would pen. - Phil A.
thank you Phil - you really are too kind. Praise such as yours is the greatest encouragement so thank you, thank you.
I've heard many praiseworthy compliments on the value of "moonshine," but none spoken as eloquently as this, but then you mean moon light. So here's some praise: "The silver line of lunar rays," Their footsteps grind on gravelled paths,""and deep beyond her gibbous eyes," are unique and beautiful lines only an artist would pen. - Phil A.
Fantastic
Bravo sir...
I love it...
Thanks loads PH
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