WELCOME VICTORIA ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ sort but very sweet and very true ! Just eight syllables in a 1~2~4~1 vertical pattern like an inverted cross ~ clever. I love a poem that has shape as well as sense ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
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Well, that's certainly true. Nice expression of a longstanding concept. - Phil A.
thank you MendedFences27
WELCOME VICTORIA ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ sort but very sweet and very true ! Just eight syllables in a 1~2~4~1 vertical pattern like an inverted cross ~ clever. I love a poem that has shape as well as sense ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
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