If You (Diacope + Anaphora Form)

gelyn

If you will leave me hanging
I will die, die, die.

If you will supersede me with someone else
I will cry,cry,cry.

Don't you dare ask me
Why,why, why?

If you will just say
goodbye, bye, bye.

Author's note:

All of my compositions are labor of love, hurt, and pain..
Originally made from my own Experiences.
A copyright not a copycat.

Gel

  • Author: Gelyn Guinto Rodriguez (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 23rd, 2017 03:18
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 10
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    THANKS GEL ~ For sharing another personal heart jerk poem in a CLASSICAL FORM ! MPS needs a little more culture ! Love the form and function of the poem and repetition is the key to the sensuousness of this ode. DIACOPE ~ repetition as in ~ DIE ~ DIE ~ DIE and ANAPHORA ~ repetition of IF YOU WILL at the beginning of each line. Your poetic erudition kick started my brain into action for my day at work ~ Thank you ~ Poetic Hugs ~ BRIAN. Please check my poem today ~ which is a humble ACROSTIC with lots of internal rhyme Thanks B



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