If You (Diacope + Anaphora Form)

Gelyn

If you will leave me hanging
I will die, die, die.

If you will supersede me with someone else
I will cry,cry,cry.

Don't you dare ask me
Why,why, why?

If you will just say
goodbye, bye, bye.

Author's note:

All of my compositions are labor of love, hurt, and pain..
Originally made from my own Experiences.
A copyright not a copycat.

Gel

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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    THANKS GEL ~ For sharing another personal heart jerk poem in a CLASSICAL FORM ! MPS needs a little more culture ! Love the form and function of the poem and repetition is the key to the sensuousness of this ode. DIACOPE ~ repetition as in ~ DIE ~ DIE ~ DIE and ANAPHORA ~ repetition of IF YOU WILL at the beginning of each line. Your poetic erudition kick started my brain into action for my day at work ~ Thank you ~ Poetic Hugs ~ BRIAN. Please check my poem today ~ which is a humble ACROSTIC with lots of internal rhyme Thanks B

    • Gelyn

      Hello, Brian and Angela!

      I’ve just found my way back to this site after quite some time. I had forgotten both my username and password, but luckily, I found my little notebook where I keep all my login details.

      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I truly appreciate it! Today, I'll be flipping through your poems, page by page, and catching up on all the beautiful words I've missed.

      Looking forward to reading more of your work.

      Gel



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