Fly away

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  Tony36 February 25th, 2017 12:28

  Great write

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  Reivax Camlost February 25th, 2017 13:34

  This sort of stream-of-consciousness writing reminds me of journaling. I've written something eerily similar to this, then proceeded to rip it out of my journal and tear it into little bits that I then scattered where the sun don't shine. That's because writing such as this is potent- one of the best ways to communicate raw emotion. Especially if it is read very fast, to simulate the feelings often held by the writer. It's the easiest and the hardest form of writing, in a couple ways. Hella interesting. Good job.

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  Reivax Camlost February 25th, 2017 13:37

  Incidentally, have you heard the Frank Sinatra song "Come fly with me"? It would prove a good counterpart to this poem, I think... If you haven't, try listening to it.

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  Goldfinch60 February 25th, 2017 15:05

  One day your wings will grow back and you will be flying high once more.