You can do better
It is simply up to you
Apply yourself accordingly
Work towards your goal efficiently
Keep at it
Continue along your path
Move towards the light
And make your world bright
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Author:
The Brooklyn Six Project™ (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 25th, 2017 14:14
- Category: Nature
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Comments4
A good message. What you feel comes from within is an old buddhist saying. Another is "Seek not to have what you want, but to want what you have". Keep traveling your path, friend. You have an enlightened soul.
Much appreciated Reivax Camlost.
Brooklyn, you've a knack for pithy poems. Great job!
Much appreciated rrodriguez.
Encouraging
Much appreciated vvnrose
Love the line 'move towards the light' it is what I always tell people to do and what I try to do myself.
Much appreciated Goldfinch60.
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