Gas came from nowhere ( Senryu Form)

gelyn

A gas emission
slowly releasing out
made the air stink.

 

  • Author: Gelyn Guinto Rodriguez (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 26th, 2017 02:08
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Thanks GEL for a very elegant SENRYU with a very ODIOUS message. Necessary operations like "muck spreading" and "Chemical Industries" do release odious gasses BUT if we know the origin we can control the smell and make the environment habitable again ! Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B

    • gelyn

      ok I will no worries

    • gelyn

      Thank you guys for the comments. .. it's simply a fart .. lol. .. but thanks it can be that way



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