In my dream,
I was walking on a handful of roses,
I felt so alive and opened,
I wasn't like a door, all shut and closed, I wasn't like an icicle, all cold and frozen, I didn't feel so imprisoned, like in my real life, I felt free and lovely and cherished
- Author: Aaliyah Gisele (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: March 1st, 2017 10:09
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 20
Comments2
Thanks LIYAH ~ for a lovely poem ~ full of hope.I trust that your lovely dream will com true soon. Yours BRIAN
Your welcome
you must have had an out of body experience, it can happen in a dream or just a weird dream, Jk nice poem WW
You hate it ?
not the quite contreery I love it ToO much you crazy personson...plus ILU 2 ww
Contreery?
Just Kidding Contrary the opposite, I loved you poem, I also like to be crazy? whacko,
nut job-ish? you know the men in the white coats are coming with the butter fly nets to get me?
plus you write good!
Ohh ! Thanks
Oh good ...That wasn't hard to explain was it?...WW
It is dumb ass
Oh sorry I was just kidding, and I am far from a dumb ass?
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