I want someone who can take me to the stars, instead of showing me pictures of the stars. I want to be able to actually touch the stars and dance around the light,
I want to also fly to the sun,
So I can feel it's flaming heat,
So I can see if I can survive around that much heat,
I want to just walk up to the moon and look at its face,
I want to feel it's coolness and I want to just relax next to the moon,
I just want to climb on the moon and scream as loud as I can so I can be heard and maybe, so God can hear me
- Author: Aaliyah Gisele (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: March 3rd, 2017 01:14
- Category: Unclassified
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Well written and expressed Great write
Me to liyah and maybe if I do touch the stars I'll burn into a fiery ball of fire. God wouldn't hear me. the person who committed to many sins to count. Although he would for sure hear you. This is a beautiful poem. I love it.
Thanks
Thanks LIYAH ~ Fortunatey my Technician is Greek so we enjoyed it ! We live in a very Pictorial Age so like you ~ I long to touch the real thing ~ especially the Stars and the Sun. We can now walk on the Moon if we have a spare $100 million ~ cheaper to go to Hawaii ! You are actually nearer to GOD on the Moon ~ Buzz Aldrin ~ Prayed on the Moon and celebrated Communion ~ but don't tell NASA ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
Thanks hoee
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