rrodriguez

Damaged Soul



My love and my best friend,
No one can’t see the tears nor
The utter futility stemming from my loss,
The aging brought on by a deeply pained faced,
so as far as laughter is concerned, it's easier said than done!
Your laughter, my laughter … I’ll want to hear them again,
Your smile, my smile … I’ll want to behold, even for a second;
Because when the joy is removed from one's life,
Then there’s no joy in living, loneliness walks with me.
I don't wish a second chance, second chances cannot fix
what has been taken from me, thus
When my life is in danger I can live with that,
But when the life of the one more precious to you
than your own is lost, it’s a quite different story.
My love and my best friend,
I live in the world of memories ...
You fill my days, my nights, my dreams,
You’re all that’s occupying my mind.
Now I'm left in pain, in sadness, and emptiness;
The pain I must face, will never leave my life
For you’re a loss I can’t replace.
In this world, the rain will fall & shed many tears of pain
The sun will shine without strength, and my life will just exist
Because my whole world is upside down, but someday, I know,
Once again, together we will be …
For when my time on earth is done, you’ll wait for me
And our eternal love once again resumed, we’ll walk,
Together, in God's presence for eternity.

 

Comments9

  • Goldfinch60

    Good emotion laden write.

  • willyweed

    well said I hope it helps our heavy hearted friend, sincerely!

  • poetboy5454

    Wow this was incredibly thoughtful of you. I wish you the best, as well as our friend.

    • rrodriguez

      Thank you for your kind words and the encouragement.

    • MendedFences27

      Sad indeed. Well expressed by you. Perhaps it will aide your friend in coping with his life. I certainly hope he is able to gain some balance and find meaning. You've presented his situation with great care and dignity. - Phil A.

      • rrodriguez

        Thank you Phil. I wrote with my heart present as I wrote. Thank you!

      • James Michael

        Very appropriate for our friend D.S., I hope we can all find peace someday.

        • rrodriguez

          Thank you James for your kind words.

        • Augustus

          Great tribute.

          • rrodriguez

            Thank you Augustus.

          • WriteBeLight

            Wonderful words rrodriguez. Such a lovely piece of writing you have written for him. Great work!

          • Diamond

            An extra ordinary emotive piece. Your heart shows in this my friend.

            • rrodriguez

              This is an open/ free-verse poem written for a very sensitive friend I met in this site. I'm happy you enjoyed it.

            • niallprideaux

              brilliantly expressed, i wondered what happened. whatever's happened i hope he's finding peace and coping.

              • rrodriguez

                Thank you for reading my poem. I wrote it for a friend in MPS to help him cope with his lost.

                • niallprideaux

                  yeah, he told me too. hope he's okay :)

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