If I could just breathe water
I would be one of them and wouldn't feel so alone
but I was never one for fitting in
because I know I'm still a world away from home
this abyss, it's endless.
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kingkev101 (Pseudonym) (
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I don't know why this reminds me of whales or porpoise I know they don't breath water, but
they may be smarter than us humans? and I guess I put you there...smarter than the average bear?
nice work here Kevin, WW
willyweed, are sure you're not certain you put me among the bears. it's better than a guess..!! I thought I would look better amongst a circus of clowns..thank you for my placement, though. means I'm moving up slightly.
ok ok lets say dancing bears! geewhiz!
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Alone and different. Well done.
thank you Tony36.
I can relate Kevin.
bless you, WriteBeIight. thank you.
Good write, hopefully one day you will rise from the abyss.
I'm sure I will Goldfinch60 and thank you.
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