If I could just breathe water
I would be one of them and wouldn't feel so alone
but I was never one for fitting in
because I know I'm still a world away from home
this abyss, it's endless.
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kingkev101 (Pseudonym) (
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I don't know why this reminds me of whales or porpoise I know they don't breath water, but
they may be smarter than us humans? and I guess I put you there...smarter than the average bear?
nice work here Kevin, WW
willyweed, are sure you're not certain you put me among the bears. it's better than a guess..!! I thought I would look better amongst a circus of clowns..thank you for my placement, though. means I'm moving up slightly.
ok ok lets say dancing bears! geewhiz!
bless you, willyweed..!
Alone and different. Well done.
thank you Tony36.
I can relate Kevin.
bless you, WriteBeIight. thank you.
Good write, hopefully one day you will rise from the abyss.
I'm sure I will Goldfinch60 and thank you.
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