…and you soar high in the sky
untouched by the worries of the wingless
old and wise but young at heart
free from the dirty city tar that blinds the eye
and the ones that wallow in the toxic stress
that rips the soul apart…
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sappho (
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Well done, this is great!
Thank you! It's my very first poem 🙂
WELCOME SAPPHO ~ Thanks for your first poem (loved it) and a very haunting tune and song ! Oh for the wings of a RAVEN ~far far above all the "toxic stress" would I fly ! Thanks for sharing ~ please check my Poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
Thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment, the song is also my work (production, vocals), thank you for listening 🙂 I will have a look at your poems now
welcome Sappho...write on!
Thank you, I will! Going to try and express more in writing from now on.. 🙂
If this is your first poem, hun, you are going to go millions of miles...anD I LOVE THAT U USED THE RAVEN SYMBOLOGY FOR THE ONE IN FLIGHT OF ALL THE BIRDS YOU COULD HAVE CHOSEN. rAVENS ARE MIRACULOUS AND BRILLIANT BEINGS..KEEP WRITING...BEST WISHES TO U
Raven is my spirit animal. They often come and find me when I'm out walking. All blackbirds, but mainly corvus corax the most majestic of them all. When they look at you they look into your eyes and you can feel that they are deep emotional and intelligent creatures. Thank you very much for your feedback!
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