touched

willyweed

Crows gaggle on a wire
In the silent falling snow
Mind wandered through a portal
To, a long, long, time ago
You were in the great room
In a castle on a hill
The minstrels played a melody
Time was standing still
The sun was setting in the dale
Late in the afternoon
You were dancing ‘round
The candle light so bright
I saw that sparkle in your eyes
Your soul a brilliant light
You touched my soul
So long ago
And once again tonight
The crows fled the wire
Snow stopped coming down
You were there I saw you
When I turned around
I saw that sparkle in your eyes
Your soul a brilliant light
You touched my soul
So long ago
And once again
tonight

 

 

  • Author: willyweed (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 11th, 2017 07:43
  • Comment from author about the poem: a poem I wrote for the love of my life, a long, long, time ago
  • Category: Fantasy
  • Views: 47
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  • Hypothesis

    This was very touching and full of Life. The emotions gathered detail on how well love should be or quite frankly cherished.

    Good read poet.

  • Tony36

    Beautifully written and expressed Great write

  • Fay Slimm.

    Such a good imaginative write that I was there in castle on the hill. A beautiful read.

  • kevin browne

    I can see the sparkle in this brilliantly written poem. excellent work there willyweed. a poetic mind that actually works very well.

    • willyweed

      you Sir are way to kind...!

      • kevin browne

        kindness is a cool thing to own my friend..!!

      • MendedFences27

        A long, long time ago she touched my soul, and she's still here with me today. A beautiful fantasy Willy with a lot of emotion, and if that ain't poetry, what is? - Phil A.

        • willyweed

          no fantasy at all Phil, I am lucky in love and have been for a very long time! Thank you for the read!

        • Augustus

          Well I'll be jiggered. Now thars a man in love. Great piece.

          • willyweed

            yes I am and have been for a long long time she was only sixteen and I was to young to know? love is grand from my point of view. she kept me alive during the war I refused to leave her! WW

          • Goldfinch60

            Brilliant write, the soul has no boundaries.

            • willyweed

              I believe you are correct Sir, thank you for the read.

            • WriteBeLight

              Very, very beautiful, loving and sweet words WW.

              • willyweed

                Thank you they mean much to me for they are true! And you are a blessing My Lady Fair! ww



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